Bitten by the Dog I Abandoned - Chapter 2

8 Comments

1. MangoTea

   The pronouns are all messed up and making it hard to follow who’s talking about who, pls fix or improve future chapters! <3 and even when he was talking about her being the other guy's wife he called her his wife instead, all of those things are in a mess

   November 27, 2023 at 5:04 am

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2. MangoTea

   I think she meant to say she doesn’t have the time to coddle someone who intruded her home, now get out when she said, “I’m in your house to hug you I’m not free”- that sentence is just such a mess like 3 thoughts ran together I’m struggling to decipher, pls fix!!

   November 27, 2023 at 5:09 am

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3. MangoTea

   and it’s her house not his, why’d she say it like that? “I’m in your house to hug you I’m not free”, that’s totally wrong. this translation is really bugging me o.o

   November 27, 2023 at 5:10 am

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   1. Cyr3nsong

      I think that “hug” line may actually be “im not free to f-k you so im not free”

      November 27, 2023 at 1:11 pm

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      1. MangoTea

         😶😶 dear god I hope not lol

         November 30, 2023 at 5:01 am

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