The Esteemed Lady of the Tea Garden - Chapter 11
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MangoTea
I knew this story was obsessed with tea but didn’t realize it would be the main focus even more than the supernatural part of the plot!
I was staying for that part- if I had known sooner they were gonna hastily stick the answers to that supernatural stuff that I care about more randomly here and there, I probably wouldn’t have even read this far, it felt chopped up and like it’s not the main focus, like bad writing in movies & shows when they randomly squeeze in such important details instead of giving them proper place before quickly moving on- most stories for smooth flow do it in the intro OR if they don’t- have a proper explanation all at once when they do the big reveal- this story dropped only half of one major part out of nowhere where it didn’t even completely make sense before moving on.
I wish they’d prioritized the supernatural stuff over the tea but this author is clearly obsessed with tea which hey I’m not blaming them, they can do what want it is their story, I’m just disappointed- it felt like they could’ve done so much more with this story and like it was going somewhere else.