The Esteemed Lady of the Tea Garden - Chapter 9

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1. MangoTea

   Considering all the hints they’ve been dropping for us here and there, I don’t like how they dropped one of the answers on us out of nowhere and hastily moved on, it seems like the hints should build but the explanation should be properly done- you don’t dropped one half of an important truth out of nowhere without finishing the other and so suddenly. Edited hastily moving on- it didn’t even feel properly touched on- nothing about it was smooth & the flow feels sloppy. But other than that, Im loving the story but if that’s how they’re gonna drop the answers on us, it kinda makes me look less forward to finding out what he is cause it brings down the quality

   April 28, 2024 at 10:58 pm

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2. MangoTea

   **so suddenly before hastily moving on-
   (Not “so suddenly. Edited hastily moving on”- spell check butt out😩)

   April 28, 2024 at 11:00 pm

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